practice 1 evaluation

i think my 1st practice is not really bad, but of course i have some mistakes in this practice. this is the part 1 and 2 of the song, i only practice this part because i didn't know how to play the next part, i haven't got the complete song notes. And since i just got a little time to practice with my group and Mr.John so i just make the chord to practice my self, but i am not sure that this chord is right or wrong, i think i have to make some improvisation to make the chord better, i will ask Mr.John later. But, after all i think my first practice is so so, not good and also not really bad